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The hero in my family is my mom. My mom is my hero because she has five children, and my mom has work company in Mexico, and she always takes care of my brothers and me. I love my mom very much. My mom now live with me and my family in Yuba City. She works now at McDonald’s. She didn’t make much money, but she loves her job. My mom is my hero.

My wife is my hero. She takes care of my two children while I am in school. She cooks, cleans, and drive our kids to school. My wife’s also my hero because she’s attending university. She studied every night and wakes up early every day. My wife she is always happy and has a smile on her face. My wife is missing Afghanistan a lot, because she’s family there. But, she’s proud to live in the U.S.A. My wife’s my hero also because she is determined to becoming a teacher. Her’s dream is to teach math in high school. She is studying math education now. She wants to make a better life for our family. That is why my wife’s my hero.

My father is my hero. While growing up in Mexico, my father always worked very hard jobs. He worked in a factory all of his lifes. While working in factory, my father always made little money. He never complained about this. My father worked hard to send me and my sister to college. My father’s dream is now coming true because I am in college. If it wasn’t for my father’s help, my sister and I would not be in college now. Another reason why my father is my hero because he built our house in Mexico. He didn’t have enough money to buy a new house, so his neighbors help him build our house. It is a small house it has only 2 bedrooms. We were just happy to have a house of our own. My father tolded us this house is our’s some day, when we turn older. My father is my hero because he worked very hard to give us the lives we have today. My father is died last year, but I will always remember him. My father is my hero.